Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Show don't tell

WILF
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging


REMEMBER TO
·                     Write in the third person
.                     Use capital letters and full stops

                                


Her eye’s were as big as a plate. Her face was red as if she was going to  burn on fire. Her mouth was shivering and moving so much that she couldn't even talk. Her ear’s were so huge like a bowls surface. Her body was shaking like she was going to have a seizure. She was imagining what would happen next……..
    
                          


He clenched his fist ready to punch someone. His tiny tears dropping from the corner of his eye’s. His eye’s going evil. His lips were shaking. his face lighting up red. He was thinking what can I do now……..

can you find out what the emotions i'm writing about.

Tuesday, 2 September 2014









 I would love to be a puppy because it is so cute to play with. it rolls around so much and always stays calm.By Angel Lee.  
                               

What Would you be if you were any animal

 I would like to be and kitten because it is fun to play with nice and cosy to sleep with it is always happy and it meows cute just like my kitten.Here is what I would love to be if I was any kind of animal.Why because it is so cute two it is nice and fluffy and my third one is it has an nice colour.Kittens are the most cutest things on earth.By Elizabeth.