Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Show don't tell

WILF
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging


REMEMBER TO
·                     Write in the third person
.                     Use capital letters and full stops

                                


Her eye’s were as big as a plate. Her face was red as if she was going to  burn on fire. Her mouth was shivering and moving so much that she couldn't even talk. Her ear’s were so huge like a bowls surface. Her body was shaking like she was going to have a seizure. She was imagining what would happen next……..
    
                          


He clenched his fist ready to punch someone. His tiny tears dropping from the corner of his eye’s. His eye’s going evil. His lips were shaking. his face lighting up red. He was thinking what can I do now……..

can you find out what the emotions i'm writing about.

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